First two words that came to my mind when I saw that picure - DAT ASS. It's round like pokeball! I had a feeling it's bit too big, but from that point of view it might looks like this. Last time I critiqued you a bit about shades, but this time you did good work with them. Hiding palms might be kinda easy trick, but many people do this too. His (her?) hair looks good. Little blush on her (his) cheeks makes whole thing even cuter. It's probably not your best work, but technically, it's a well done, although not as detailed as some other arts of yours. I have a feeling it lacks something, it's hard to say it clearly. Maybe some kind of outfit parts? Stockings? Or maybe any small thing that connects his male and female form?
This is a very different pic type for you but hey, gotta make some $$$ and it's a challenge and I know you like that! Definitely good work on the curves of Ashley and interesting choice of view for this one, don't see you use this too often but it came out nicely!