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(Contains: sexual themes)
The girl chosen by the majority in my previous poll is finally here! The sweet tomboy Akane is getting ready for some hard training.
Thanks to everyone who voted. There will be another poll soon asking you which girl should I draw next.
The link to the rule 34 version of this pic will be given in my next journal, so stay tuned.
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:iconffecchifan:
Personally, I think you could od it better. Starting with a good sides - pose. It wasn't easy to draw and you managed to draw it quite well. Same goes to one of the hardest things to draw - fingers Then shades - there aren't much of them, but they're mostly well placed. So this leads us to the things that I think could be better. First her face. You always do very good faces and I had a feeling that style or Rumiko Takahashi is something easy for you. But looking at her eyes, I can't shake of the feeling that she has a squint. Don't you think, she should look at the boot and lace? Then, there are almost no shades at her face. Body is well shaded, hair too, but face is not.
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shinjiasuka4ever Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A very different pose here but you did job of drawing everyone's favorite tomboy, Akane Tendo. Nice to see her out training!
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ScoobyKun Jan 31, 2013  Professional Filmographer
This is Great!.. only critique would be to fix the right thigh, (screen left) some of the lines are confusing.. fix it and the perspective would be more understandable..
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:iconstreetgals9000:
buen trabajo por tu dibujo de akane, keidashu !!!
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:iconkeidashu:
Muchas gracias ^^
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Gedaru Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nice picture hehe *stares* anyway,I can't help with critique but it's very well done!
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:iconkeidashu:
Thanks a lot :D
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