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Akane Tendou Gym Clothes

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The girl chosen by the majority in my previous poll is finally here! The sweet tomboy Akane is getting ready for some hard training.
Thanks to everyone who voted. There will be another poll soon asking you which girl should I draw next.
The link to the rule 34 version of this pic will be given in my next journal, so stay tuned.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Personally, I think you could od it better. Starting with a good sides - pose. It wasn't easy to draw and you managed to draw it quite well. Same goes to one of the hardest things to draw - fingers Then shades - there aren't much of them, but they're mostly well placed. So this leads us to the things that I think could be better. First her face. You always do very good faces and I had a feeling that style or Rumiko Takahashi is something easy for you. But looking at her eyes, I can't shake of the feeling that she has a squint. Don't you think, she should look at the boot and lace? Then, there are almost no shades at her face. Body is well shaded, hair too, but face is not.